Friday Poem

I humbly submit another poem.........

 

I wrote a poem about my mom last night. Its a hateful poem that I used to help get anger out after I learned some more stuff she did so I doubt anyone would like it

 

that is a brilliant poem! it kinda sent shivers as i read it....dunno why.... 11/10 publish some more
wish i was talented

 

Really beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing it.

 

Thats a brilliant poem Very touching.

 

Good poem Bocceman! And so true, for those of us that were blessed to have good parents.

 

Excellent poem, Bocce!


Sadly, that's something I have never experienced, and will never know.



I envy people with families, even if theey're not that great.

 

Thanks All...I really enjoy writing poetry. I'm presently working on a "geek" piece for next week or so . Havin' fun with it at any rate.

 

that was a truely touching poem. you have real talent. aloha.