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Lafe - Episode 1

Discussion in 'The Lounge' started by goldfish, Feb 3, 2005.

  1. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    Tell me whatchathink :D

    Only thing missing is the picture in the background, which is to be supplied by one of my friends :)

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  2. bailmeout

    bailmeout Specialist

    pretty neat ;)
  3. LostGirls9

    LostGirls9 MajorGeek

    Goldy, it looks great!

    I can't even draw stick figures.

    You have real talent!
  4. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    Cheers :) But is it funny? :p

    EDIT: Oops, i forgot the title. "Wi-Fri"
  5. Kodo


    not exactly sure what's goin on in the strip...like..what is she "grrr" ing about?
  6. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    He's grrring because he got disconnected from the network... Maybe I need to get a better symbol to signify that... :p
  7. Kodo


    yeah, that would help.

    Next she praises that she has a connection .. apparently snaps a photo and blinds her friend and then says.. "oops..." for what?
  8. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    Thats not a camera, its a cantenna!! I guess it might help if you could see it more clearly, i had to squish it to let me attach it.

    Yeah, its a cantenna and its got lots of gain on it, and so fries the girls head.

    And the GUY on the laptop isnt a she. :p

    I'm not sure whats going on in this thread any more :eek: :D
  9. Kodo


    Sorry man, just didn't pick up on some of the nuiances of your strip.
    If that's a guy, then I would make some adjustments because it looks like a chic(k). (facial hair helps;))

    Give some more "lead in" to the strip

    Now that I follow your strip (as explained) , I give it a 7.5 ouf 10 for funny factor because I could see a geek whipping out a giant antenna like that in a cafe...lol.
  10. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    Wehey :D

    Lead in... hmmmmmmm... tricky, I've only got 4 panels to work with... perhaps a short description above the first panel?
  11. g1lgam3sh

    g1lgam3sh MajorGeek

    Perhaps title it Hotspot!!!
  12. Kodo


    Bingo! :)
  13. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    Done and done ;) Daym, its looking pretty schweet with stroked outlines and description box... :D Just waiting for that artwork on the walls....
  14. Flash Animator

    Flash Animator Private E-2

    Yes , lol , I am a big fan of online comics , didnt really tickle my funny bone though . Sorry , its just an opinion . ( btw sorry if that sounded bad , and remember critique is good )
  15. Kodo


    Come on now.. lets have it!
  16. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    Nah, thats fine.... the other strips will definatley be more "funny"... probably less subtle as well, definatly less geeky ;)

    And yeah I'll show you the finished product as soon as I've got this picture!
  17. WobblesRArt

    WobblesRArt MajorGeek

    The white square on the wall could be another episode part too…….little stick people, or a commercial, advertising your company…….there is always going to be somebody that don’t get it!……you could use the white box, to help explain, what’s happening…..wobbles
  18. fleppen

    fleppen Gumshoe

    hehe it made me laugh :D
  19. scorcer

    scorcer ajMro keGe


    I knew it was gonna have WI-FI at the Lafe' :)

    a "little geeky" my a$$ :p

    Keep up the good work Goldy ;) :cool:
  20. goldfish

    goldfish Lt. Sushi.DC

    Ok, here is the almost completley finished version....

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  21. Kodo


    yeah.. much better!! :)
  22. WobblesRArt

    WobblesRArt MajorGeek

    works.....ya you rock
  23. scorcer

    scorcer ajMro keGe

    good one goldy! :cool:

  24. Maxwell

    Maxwell Folgers

    Well done Goldy! Nice use of colour!

    Oh you mean the "bun" on his head. Anyway don't all "chicks" nowadays have bare midriffs? :)

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