Want Opinions On A Sign Design (gun related)

This sign has been on the internets for a a while. On another forum I go to, some of the folks want me to make some signs for them. The first attachment is the one floating around the internets, the second is one I made in Photoshop. Any ideas to make it better?

 

A few brainstorms-

You could move the gun to the left and on the right put as silhouette target with "centre mass" written underneath denoting the kill zone.

Or something like this with centre mass written underneath.

http://www.targets.net/html/Targets/S/ST CROIX-Q.html

Hard to improve on the original though IMO pretty short and sweet,the other thing if you have to make loads would be to not use solid colours for the green outline,just burns through colour so make the "Notice" in green instead of white writing on a green background and change the circle around the gun to a different colour such as red,make the black outline thinner also.

 

Good point about the ink. They will most likely be 9x12, so not a whole lot of waste, but will do one to see how it looks with just green text.

 

You could always do one in "Engrish":

"We honor your possession of big-bang device. Please keep exciting large shaft wrapped for your protection. Extend courtesy of lead poisoning to dangerous persons only if important." :-D

 

:-D

Don't think concealed carry is very popular in other countries.